During the fall semester, I put together a student committee to update my revision policy, which really needed some work after becoming stale. After a few Skype sessions and brainstorming on a document, here is what they came up with with me:
I strongly believe one of the most important lessons I learned about writing was that quality work almost always entails rewriting, but also reflection on what lessons can be learned and implemented in future writing. In this class, in place of a straight paper revision, you will analyze the mistakes I noted in comments on your paper and write a response discussing the comments and how you would correct them in future writing. This means if you are not satisfied with your grade, you may submit a response (directions are below), shared to my school Google Drive (wwend@bcc.edu), within 3-5 days after I comment on your paper.
My expectation that for every mistake you are fixing, there is a brief paragraph discussing how to correct your work. I would consider directly citing our book readings (and the writing manual from ENG101) or your notes from class discussions in this response. Please do not cite random writing from the world wide web. There should be a second paragraph discussing specifically how you would fix it in your own essay as well.
If you are unsure what to write about, you can always schedule an appointment during office hours whether in person or electronic. Regardless, I would strongly suggest meeting with me to make sure you understand your grade and how to improve it.
Anywhere between one (1) to three (3) points can be added to your paper proportionally depending on the overall point total of the paper.
Of course, there are no revisions on term papers. Also, you may not use your revision to correct a plagiarized paper (see academic honesty policy below). Finally, revisions on your citation practice assignment do not count towards your revision. (Revised Fall 2015 by HC, DH, TC)
Books Read In 2015
- The Battle for Justice in Palestine by Ali Abunimah
- The Doubt Factory by Paolo Bacigalupi
- Jennifer Government by Max Barry
- Professor Borges: A Course on English Literature by Jorge Luis Borges
- Borges at Eighty: Conversations by Jorge Luis Borges
- Collected Fictions by Jorge Luis Borges
- The Darkling Child: The Defenders of Shannara by Terry Brooks
- Bodies That Matter: On the Discursive Limits of Sex by Judith Butler
- Lilith's Brood by Octavia E. Butler
- Fantastic Tales: Visionary and Everyday by Italo Calvino
- Between the World and Me by Ta-Nehisi Coates
- You're Never Weird on the Internet (Almost): A Memoir by Felicia Day
- Replay: The History of Video Games by Tristan Donovan
- The Autobiography of Benjamin Franklin by Benjamin Franklin
- The Peripheral by William Gibson
- Playing the Whore: The Work of Sex Work by Melissa Gira Grant
- Death in Classical Hollywood Cinema by Boaz Hagin
- The Odyssey by Homer
- A Doll's House by Henrik Ibsen
- The Girls of Atomic City: The Untold Story of the Women Who Helped Win World War II by Denise Kiernan
- Spam Nation: The Inside Story of Organized Cybercrime-from Global Epidemic to Your Front Door by Brian Krebs
- One Nation Under God: How Corporate America Invented Christian America by Kevin M. Kruse
- The Muslims Are Coming: Islamophobia, Extremism, and the Domestic War on Terror by Arun Kundnani
- Passing by Nella Larsen
- The Complete Stories by Clarice Lispector
- A Good Man Is Hard to Find and Other Stories by Flannery O'Connor
- The CIA in Iran: The 1953 Coup and the Origins of the US-Iran Divide by Christopher Petherick
- The Foundation Pit by Andrey Platonov
- Transformers: More Than Meets The Eye Volume 1 by James Roberts
- Transformers: More Than Meets The Eye Volume 2 by James Roberts
- Transformers: More Than Meets The Eye Volume 3 by James Roberts
- Transformers: More Than Meets The Eye Volume 4 by James Roberts
- Transformers: More Than Meets The Eye Volume 5 by James Roberts
- Transformers: More Than Meets The Eye Volume 6 by James Roberts
- The Disaster Artist: My Life Inside The Room, the Greatest Bad Movie Ever Made by Greg Sestero
- The Oxford Shakespeare: Othello: The Moor of Venice (The Oxford Shakespeare) by William Shakespeare
- The Squared Circle: Life, Death, and Professional Wrestling by David Shoemaker
- Against Interpretation: And Other Essays by Susan Sontag
- Automate This: How Algorithms Took Over Our Markets, Our Jobs, and the World by Christopher Steiner
- The Epic Struggle for the Internet of Things by Bruce Sterling
- Origins: Fourteen Billion Years of Cosmic Evolution by Neil deGrasse Tyson
- The Purity Myth: How America's Obsession with Virginity Is Hurting Young Women by Jessica Valenti
- We by Yevgeny Zamyatin
THATCamp Community College 2016
Registration for THATCamp Community College 2016 is now open. Please come join us at Rowan College At Burlington County in June. We will have a lot more news about sessions soon.
What I Am Up To This Semester
I had a rather busy winter break. I tried to squeeze in a bunch of doctor's appointments, visits to family, and other stuff. I also got new glasses.
This semester I am teaching only one section of Composition I, but three of Composition II. I requested this: I wanted to see what it was like to have such a strong variance, which is normally in the opposite direction. I am also teaching American Cinema again.
My office hours for this semester:
Monday 1130-1230 (Laurel Hall Work Rooms)
Tuesday 1000-1100 (Parker 413B)
Wednesday 1130-1230 (Laurel Hall Work Rooms)
Thursday 1000-1100 (Parker 413B)
Friday 1300-1400 (Laurel Hall Work Rooms)
I will, of course, be traveling down to Stockton University in April for the annual Literature Program party. Around the same time, I will be giving another scholarship award to an RCBC student that is transferring to Stockton at our annual academic awards ceremony.
I will have more information about THATCamp Community College 2016 at the semester goes on. Registration should open very soon.
THATCamp Philadelphia: Product Management
- Attendees go over current project experiences.
Session moderator gave some praise to Trello.
Daily standups on Google Hangouts/Skype/etc to check in and discuss progress.
Important to have wrapup meetings.
THATCamp Philadelphia: THATCamp Tips (Session Proposers/Moderators=William Patrick Wend/Chris Gazzara)
Chris and I proposed this session to discuss ways to move forward with THATCamp Community College. As you can see, session attendees had plenty of useful ideas.
Give some kind of credit to students for attending.
Can THATCamp be a part of career reorientation?
Budget planning needs to happen early.
What about service learning?
How about workshops for basics of retraining...Wikipedia, Wordpress, Google Drive, etc
“Six tools in an hour” workshop suggested.
Could there be connections made to career services in that regard too?
What can someone take from a workshop that can be immediately implemented in the classroom?
Could there be THATCamp sessions on project management?
A suggestion to put up a history of your THATCamp. We can definitely do that.
What about sponsorship?
Potential for some synchronization with our undergraduate research program here at RCBC and THATCamp.
What criteria is required for a workshop to “count” for something?
Workshops for students on how to use phones for notes/annotation? Active learning note taking strategies.
Possible workshop on whether _____ is useful in the classroom. Let attendees keep a scorecard.
A 30 minute summation workshop on previously done topics from our Center For Learning & Instruction.
THATCamp Philadelphia: Regional Digital Humanities (Session Proposer/Moderator=John Theibault)
John Theibault moderated this session on creating more regional digital humanities programs.
Connection between regionalism and nationalism.
How does unconference model help or hinder regionalism?
Are there other regional digital humanities programs like PhillyDH?
We discussed the Center For Learning & Instruction here at RCBC.
What else besides THATCamp can we do at local institutions to aide their projects?
What can be done virtually to facilitate meetups with likeminded people?
How do we get more non-academics involved in the digital humanities? (I offered some caution here to avoid corporate influence)